much too slow for a chase scene. it needs more kick right at the beginning to get that feeling of panic and making you want to run.
I see what you mean. I will try to correct this.
FINISH IT! ITS TOO GOOD! and don't forget to continue the escalation, its my favorite
It feels more ominous than serene, but I like it all the more for it. it makes it feel like the calm before a battle where victory is impossible. the warriors simply waiting for their final breath in the next bout.
Thanks, I think you made a good point. It's not the kind of serenity you would expect, but rather a repose after ceasefire. Something to get you through hard times.
Weird. I love the first part with the storm and the chorus, but it doesn't flow into the piano jazz AT ALL. I was expecting an organ or something to match such an ominous intro, but the second phase is just a jazzy song that might be a town theme in an RPG. disappointing, but if you put effort into matching the atmosphere of instruments, you could get something amazing.
sounds like something between a chipmunk and a baby, kinda ruins the song.
yeah, should of aborted it :(
You really should leave comments for your songs.
How am I supposed to help if I don't know what you were going for?
I'm not really sure what I was going for with this song, usually when I make stuff I just turn my brain off and put a bunch of notes in. I have no idea what kinda stuff I should put in my comments if you wanna help you can send a message explaining wha t kinds of stuff I should comment on
needs a little bass to add to the intensity, just a little though. A lot of people bury good music in bass and ruin it, I would hate for that to happen to this.
My god, This is perfect!
It is the perfect BG music to a scene I'm writing of two lovers waking up in a lush forest after a romantic night together.
Thank you very much :D That'd be lovely
Well there is a reason there has never been a Jazz song that sounds like this, this isn't jazz.
This is more a techno song
don't get me wrong, I like it, but its not jazz
you should submit more things to newgrounds, after all, it is built on feedback
Lol, that would make sense. It saddens me that I can't add more life (hell, even less robotic sounds would be nice) to my FL studio songs. Thank you regardless though, and I think I may be adding a disco/disco-electro song soon :D.
This sounds like a remix of metroid prime's opening theme
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