this looks like it might have had an interesting story if someone more experienced in flash made it. keep practicing and come back to this someday
this looks like it might have had an interesting story if someone more experienced in flash made it. keep practicing and come back to this someday
Okay I will keep practicing.
Keep iit up
Someday You will at the level of Aceofredspades and the llike if you keep improving
thanks, it means alot to me :)
potential
if you add some BG music, the lack of voices wouldn't stand out so much
maybe a few carefully placed sound effects too.
Fixed that check back
hehe
I personally was expecting a landmine
nice work
that'd be too easy... lol
okay
so this looks like it could have been impressive had you prioritized the quality of the final product more
couldn't read any of the credits an couldn't see half of what was going on.
clean it up and resubmit it and it might even get frontpaged.
Quality is important, never forget that.
I would like to but the backgrounds are crazy big .pngs and there are effects from after effects and the like. I had to pull this out of flash at about the rough stage because I couldn't touch any part of it without killing something in the project. There is a higher quality version and you can find the link in the description.
And yes, there was a rush to get it done and I was really trying for high quality but as a result the story acting and animation didn't get the time or attention they deserved.
um ok...
Very good flash skill but it wasn't funny or entertaining.
work on your script writing
Strange how I've always been trying to improve my flash skills, but overlooked the actual storyline.. Thanks, great review, helped me a lot. :D
Love it
Time to make another
that time already... *checks watch :O
O-o
Nothing so simple has ever made me laugh so hard
Nice work
also replay button doesn't work
Thank you very much, it really pleases to me.
Well, I've just tested the replay button, and... it works O.o be sure you clicked in the animation before pressing enter to replay :)
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